Black Swan- REWORKED.

After having a crit at Uni I have made some amendments. I personally wasn't happy with the text on the last one, but I'm also still unsure with this one. What do you think?

I was told that the space could have been filled a little better so I have also put some more "darkness" and texture around the portrait.

Another thing I wasn't completely happy with was the lines on the face which I have tried to perfect a little.

Which one do you prefer?

Editorial number 5- FINAL.

Editorial number 4-Thursday (DRAFT)

If I end up finalizing this draft next week I would like to obviously use plenty more detail.

I would draw the buildings or maybe print them, there would also be more of the surroundings rather than just a few buildings. I would like to label them all maybe too. Plus use plenty of colour.

This one is VERY rough!! haha.

Editorial number 3-Wednesday (DRAFT)

Editorial number 2-Tuesday (DRAFT)

Editorial number 1-Monday (DRAFT)

Little White Lies- Black Swan

Project brief set for Uni for over Christmas.

I've been messing about with this for a while but I'm still unsure about it. 

Any comments would be appreciated. (:

This is my second attempt at the project, i used Photoshop quite a bit for this one which i don't normally do. Trying to get the hang of it.

What do you think?