Editorial re-work. "You May Scoff"

I have re-worked this piece as the last one I did for it I didn't think it was clear that the article was about weight, so added the tape measures. I added these in the last piece but after a uni crit it was clear that they weren't effective, the feedback I got also was that the balls of tape were too perfect and round so I balled some tape up myself, took a photo and copied it. I also thought the colour of the tape needed changing so i have changed the yellow to a green colour. 

Any thoughts or changes?