I think this looks great. The clouds look fab, clever to use one as a text box that works really well. Though, I wonder if the buildings look a little sketchy. The Belinda Chen post you made last week had a nice way of including buildings subtly, on 'cycling in London'. Perhaps even something like this... (http://www.heartagency.com/artist/LucindaRogers/biog) ...would work spiffingly. The peach and the birds however look awesome! It's great seeing your work.
thankyou. yeah that's what i wasn't sure about, it feels like you focus in on the buildings more than the peach. working on another idea at the moment, will post that up when it's done. thankyou for your opinion (:
I think this looks great. The clouds look fab, clever to use one as a text box that works really well. Though, I wonder if the buildings look a little sketchy. The Belinda Chen post you made last week had a nice way of including buildings subtly, on 'cycling in London'. Perhaps even something like this...
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The peach and the birds however look awesome! It's great seeing your work.
thankyou. yeah that's what i wasn't sure about, it feels like you focus in on the buildings more than the peach. working on another idea at the moment, will post that up when it's done. thankyou for your opinion (:
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